Space

Someone in need of solitude to cure their pain

When you are hurt, you're in pain
Within that pain you can't sense
And any comfort will not work

When you're hugged, you shrug it off
When you're kissed, you lash out
When you're spoken, you get irritated

Not everyone are the same
And these comforts will not cure
What we feel inside

No offense to those who care
But all we want is space to heal
This will help us feel in peace
In this space of ours

This space will help us overcome this sadness
Away from the things that reminds us of it
This space we will take advantage
So that we can become what we once was
A joyful human being

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Everybody wants even a "piece" of "happiness" in life but only few .. are able to achieve such places of comfort. No matter how worst the time come your way, you must be with "patience" and let the time go walk outta your beautiful fluffy barefoot. Nice flow of ink!

[The Nude Writer]

Wonderfully written poem. You have a way with words :)