Stand

I have a Holy Place where to stand,
A place so beautiful, lovely, grand.
It's no where, really, no Sacred Grove,
A mood with love and peace wove.
It's a place settled in my heart,
My actions will show you it's part.
It's a state I build each time I read,
And where I've planted that mustard seed.
I have both my feet set firmly there,
Where peace and promise hang in the air.
Come join me, together we'll stand,
Come reach out and take my right hand.
There we'll wait for the Lord to come
And join him again where we come from.

Reviews

[Rae :3]

It's really well written! Bravo!

[LunarSong]

Thank you :)

[Dearantlers]

Nice! I love it!! The message in this poem is a great one! Very very well written! :)

[LunarSong]

Thank you. :)

[Dearantlers]

haha, you're welcome :) by the way, you guys have a book on hold at the library that can now be picked up, just so ya know :) It's the Candy Shop War #2

[LunarSong]

Really? Matt wants to read those, but he hasn't read the first one yet.

[Dearantlers]

huh, well it says on your account that its reserved for you guys...

[LunarSong]

It probably is, ah, Matthew, I'll tell him.

[Dearantlers]

ok, thanks :)

[LunarSong]

I'll tell him tomorrow.

[Calibaster]

This is Great! did you show it to your young women's leaders?

[LunarSong]

Nope, I haven't actually...

[LunarSong]

Sorry, I didn't mean to mark your comment as nonconstructive.

[Calibaster]

I didn't even notice. :)

[LunarSong]

Yep, well I really didn't mean to, it just won't let me change it, which is rather annoying!

[Calibaster]

That's stupid. :) But that's okay. ;)

[LunarSong]

Okay, I guess as long as you're okay with it ;)

[Calibaster]

I am. How bad can it be?

[LunarSong]

Well other people might think I don't appreciate your opinion ;)

[Calibaster]

Then put that you do.

[LunarSong]

Okay.. do you really want me too though??

[Calibaster]

If you want to. I don't mind.

[LunarSong]

Na, few people will probably even read it.

[Calibaster]

Sounds good, and logical. ;)

[LunarSong]

Yep.............

[Calibaster]

You always were logical. :)

[LunarSong]

Was I? Hmm.. I don't recall being that logical when I was two... or five for that matter.

[Calibaster]

I hate realism. I'm a fantastist myself.

[LunarSong]

Okay, you hate realism...

[Calibaster]

I do. I really really do.

[LunarSong]

Fine by me, I guess.

[Calibaster]

Great! Do you like it?

[LunarSong]

Reality????

[Calibaster]

Yep. do you like it?

[LunarSong]

Well, frankly, yes. At least my reality.

[Calibaster]

Not me! :) ;)

[LunarSong]

Okay... I admit sometimes I feel like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bQmXgjod8B0
And sometimes like this https://www.lds.org/pages/mormon-messages?lang=eng#things-as-they-really-are ;) I dare you to watch both of those :)

[Calibaster]

Dare me? Is that a threat?

[LunarSong]

no, just I doubt you will

[Calibaster]

Well I can't now. I'm at school.

[LunarSong]

Okay, well you can when you get home.

[Calibaster]

Sounds good.

[LunarSong]

Okay, the first one's just a song though...

[LunarSong]

Called the real world, by Owl City.

[Calibaster]

OH, I like Owl city! ;)

[LunarSong]

I do to, well mostly.

[LunarSong]

too, not to

[Calibaster]

It's okay. At least you noticed it. ;)

[LunarSong]

Yep, I have a problem with to, and too. And with the other two me and Laura decided that it should be pronounced "t-woe" How funny would it be if we said everything the way it's spelled?

[RachelReaper]

This is beautiful, I love the way you describe this in such beautiful terms.

[LunarSong]

Thank you so much :)

[RachelReaper]

You're welcome.

[LunarSong]

:)

[Nix]

A very unique poem. Well written all around. It starts off strong and ends up stronger. Very well done.

[LunarSong]

Thank you so much.

[Night]

I never get tired of your style! :)
This is a great piece of work, and I've never seen anything quite like it!

[LunarSong]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it :)

[Brian]

I'm not a religious person but I think it's great that you are so excited about your faith! Great poem! I could definitely hear this in a song.

[LunarSong]

Thank you. :)