Ten Values

Ten Values

A Poem by LunarSong
"

A poem I had to write for English that I think turned out nicely :)

"

Be loyal and faithful in all you do

Add on with learning to all that you knew

Have love and charity for all you meet

Be humble, yet know that you are elite

Keep your word, your integrity, I beg

Work hard, it refines and removes the dregs

Be modest in your dealings and your dress

Have self-control, avoid the future mess

Be virtuous, and in all means, be pure

Keep your head up, persevere and endure.

© 2013 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
Please tell me what you think :) Also please rate ;)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A very brief and moving Polonius-esque speech (and Polonius himself even says "brevity is the soul of wit". Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I really liked the word "dregs". It brings so much more character into the poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Farrsight

5 Years Ago

You are very Welcome!
I swear I've heard these somewhere! ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Alverrann

5 Years Ago

True. Very true. :)
LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Hm... sadly.
Alverrann

5 Years Ago

It is kinda sad. ;)
Lovely flow and great lessons. Good write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I liked this. A sweet sense of rhyme coupled with ten values! Good Job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

283 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 21, 2013
Last Updated on November 21, 2013

Author

LunarSong
LunarSong

?



About
I like writing (duh), reading (double duh), tv (who doesn't?), school (weird, right?), martial arts, stargazing, superheroes, reading wikipedia articles... er, just living. I enjoy living. The small t.. more..

Writing
Lead Me On Lead Me On

A Story by LunarSong


I am Faith I am Faith

A Poem by LunarSong


Ancient Ancient

A Poem by LunarSong