Adieu

Adieu

A Poem by LunarSong

Now I must go my separate path, 
But I do not leave with wrath.
Do not cry for me my dear friend
Don't you dare a tear for me shed.
For we shall meet soon again I swear,
But for the present I bid you fare-
Well, my dear friend, adieu
Until next I see you.

© 2014 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
I wrote this poem in my head write before falling asleep, I was so happy that I still remembered it in the morning! :) Please comment.

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Omg I love this xxxx
It's a treasure

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad that this little poem is still being enjoyed. :)
I like how you spelled "write" in your review. Sneaky. Or just a mistake. Anyway, I loved it! It is really diverse and unique.

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Oh haha, that was totally a mistake :) Thanks :)
Farrsight

5 Years Ago

you are welcome!
This is a great bittersweet story. I feel we all know this pain, but it's rare to find the solace and comfort in the hopes of seeing this missing soul again, but when it's accomplished it is blissful. If I had to point one concern, "But I do not leave with wrath" seems a bit out of place. All of the other lines are powerfully sympathetic, but this line seems somewhat mundane. Otherwise, I really like it as is.

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad that you liked it :)
This reminds me when my best Brazilian friends left!!! It was SO sad, but I will see them again someday. Whether they come to America, or I go to Brazil. Thank you. I love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Starscraper

5 Years Ago

I know so!
LunarSong

5 Years Ago

I'm sorry.
Starscraper

5 Years Ago

It's okay.
I agree. Adieu. ( I love that word!)

Posted 5 Years Ago


LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Yes, who doesn't?
Alverrann

5 Years Ago

I don't know.
LunarSong

5 Years Ago

Me neither...

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