I Told the Savior

I Told the Savior

A Poem by LunarSong

"Come unto me, all Ye that labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest. Take my yoke upon you, and learn of me; for I am meek and lowly in heart: and ye shall find rest" Matthew 11:28-29(KJV)

I told the Savior I'm worthless,
He told me I was wrong.
I told the Savior it's hopeless,
He responded with a song.
I came to Him in tears,
He dried them with his hand.
I came to Him with silent fears,
He turned them into sand.
I asked Him if I was important,
He said of course, He made me.
I asked Him if I'll be triumphant,
He said yes, just wait and see.
I watched Hin heal the blind,
He showed me what love means.
I watched Hin heal afflictions of every kind,
He showed me kings and queens.
I heard Him pray to our Father,
He taught me what to say.
I heard Him talk to his mother,
He taught me to treat mine the same way.
I walked with Hin through deserts,
He carried me when I grew faint.
I walked with Him and other converts,
He guided and protected his Saints.
I talked with Him face to face,
He embraced me in His arms.
I followed Him to Calvary,
He saved me from sin.
I followed Him to Calvary,
He died so I could win.
I talked with Him in His Father's place,
He spoke with no worldly charms.
I said, "Thou knowest that I love thee."
He echoed ad to Peter, "Feed my sheep."
I asked and for what fee,
He assured that He'd watch over my sleep.
I knelt alone in solitude,
He was still there to hear.
I prayed, offered up my soul,
He listened and answered round.
I prayed filled with live coal,
He to me forgiveness found.

© 2015 LunarSong

Author's Note

I hope that you like it. I was going through one of my notebooks and found this. I decide to put it up. :) God loves you. :)

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This is beautiful and touching! This deserves careful consideration and revision. Consider using stanzas to build transitions. This starts very clear and strong, then ends with less clarity.You've chosen the worthiest of all topics.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Thanks. :) It does deserve revision, I haven't read it in a year.
All glory and honor belongs to God! This terrific my friend, thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thank you. I am glad that you like it. :)

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