I am Faith

I am Faith

A Poem by LunarSong

I am a little seed
Displayed in noble deeds.
I have the power
To tumble towers,
To part the fountain
And move the mountain.
I am the leveler
To the wine reveler.
But I myself can do nothing
Without yourself to do something.
I am the strength of mankind
That gives sight to the blind.
I am the faith, your faith and trust
Coupled with action is a must.
With you, with me, and us with the Lord
Oh what can happen with a prayerful word!

© 2015 LunarSong


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LunarSong
A little poem I found going through my writing. I don't know why I didn't post it, but I decided to now. I hope you enjoy it.

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If it's been a while, it might be wanting a rewrite. Some do once dusted off. To the wine reveler perfect, but than to contrast you can do nothing without you? I would say you left some meat on the bone there. Do you want God to appear and enable? Enable the verse to allow for him to appear. Just my thoughts

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you. Yeah, I feel like a lot of my poems could use a little revising. Thank you for your ideas.. read more

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