Grim

Grim

A Poem by nothing grinner
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silly poem

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Once upon a time, there was a little boy,

He lived with his mummy and daddy and had a life of joy!

But Daddy left Mummy for a W***e-

Mummy got depressed, she drank more and more-

Then Daddy got AIDs which served him right,

No sex for Daddy now his Blood is Shite.

Mummy really couldn't cope-

She died the next day hung on a rope,

She left a letter for the Boy saying,

"Its all your Fault"

The Boy couldn't care less,

He dide that day on an Overdose!

© 2008 nothing grinner


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I love this but i hate it.

I love the write, in general, but the message hits a nerve, its sad but honest... I love it... I hate it... I love it, though...

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow...that's kinda sad. but it was silly! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very dark,and I like dark stuff.......proof that reality can be very dark too.......great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 24, 2008

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nothing grinner
nothing grinner

Hull, England, England



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i'm a student illustrator in my second year at university. i studied at the hull school of art and design. i like to write poems, lyrics and short stories as well as my painting and drawing. i love mu.. more..

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