Grim

silly poem

Once upon a time, there was a little boy,

He lived with his mummy and daddy and had a life of joy!

But Daddy left Mummy for a W***e-

Mummy got depressed, she drank more and more-

Then Daddy got AIDs which served him right,

No sex for Daddy now his Blood is Shite.

Mummy really couldn't cope-

She died the next day hung on a rope,

She left a letter for the Boy saying,

"Its all your Fault"

The Boy couldn't care less,

He dide that day on an Overdose!

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

I love this but i hate it.

I love the write, in general, but the message hits a nerve, its sad but honest... I love it... I hate it... I love it, though...

[oranges_melt]

wow...that's kinda sad. but it was silly! :D

[James Takeo Panton]

Very dark,and I like dark stuff.......proof that reality can be very dark too.......great work!