Passing Emotions

Passing Emotions

A Poem by nothing grinner

old poem, for a friend;o)

Passing emotions between our selves,
A tree of feelings within our selves,
Crawling under each others skin,
Finding our selves, so irritating.

Passing translucent explanations,
That pass right through our expectations,
Of our selves and each other,
But still we keep a hold of one another-

Drift apart through the space of time,
A cold explanation takes me as if I'm blind,
Don�t patronise me cause I know you to well,
Now so what if u fell,
Stand up, cause your doing so well-

Your hidden troubles so plain to see,
Take a deep breath and be what you want to be!
Take a good look and see all that there is,
A warm explanation now you give-
No bad intentions that this comes with,
A life a head of us, now just to give?

© 2008 nothing grinner

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It's absolutely gorgeous!
I love it! ^__^

Posted 14 Years Ago

A beautifully penned sentiment...

Posted 14 Years Ago

I like this. I like the message, but i LOVE the rhythm of it, they rhyme scheme is really great.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TS might not be Frost or Eliot but combined with Nix they made music. Perhaps another colab?...
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3 Reviews
Added on April 16, 2008


nothing grinner
nothing grinner

Hull, England, England

i'm a student illustrator in my second year at university. i studied at the hull school of art and design. i like to write poems, lyrics and short stories as well as my painting and drawing. i love mu.. more..


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