Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Novaki
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Save me

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Because the truth is we are all dead inside
Only half alive and torn into one million separate pieces
Barely breathing
Holding on to what?
I'm not sure what this is all for
Sandy beaches
Building houses and it all falls apart
Does God blame me or does he see that I'm in an ocean drowning
Save me

© 2012 Novaki


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An interesting read which leaves many questions and options to interpret. Certainly makes you think about it. Enjoyed the work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Novaki

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review! :D

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Novaki
Novaki

Meridian, MS



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Hello everyone :) I am a 20 year old college student in Mississippi. I have been diagnosed with a thought disorder and I am taking medicine for bipolar, and schizophrenia. This has all been a very.. more..

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A Poem by Novaki