Apparently Tonya Needs to Start Writing Hallmark Greetings...

Apparently Tonya Needs to Start Writing Hallmark Greetings...

A Poem by Tonya (the Night Writer)
"

see what being in love does to me? bleh....

"

When I see others who are searching for their soulmate,
It makes me even more thankful that I found you.
When I see others who are going through break ups,
It makes me even more thankful we are still going strong,
When I see others whose loved one is far away,
It makes me even more thankful for each second that you are
here with me.
Everything I see reminds me of how lucky I am to have you by my side.



 

© 2008 Tonya (the Night Writer)


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lol good job..no really i mean that lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Would it be wrong to say this is above Hallmark? This is a nice portrayal of the fuzzy feeling a person gets when they have it going on, romantically speaking.
Stupid happy lovers.......throw rocks at em.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pure, unadulterated sap... which just happens to be the best kind of sap. The title is definitely appropriate as it feels very greeting cardish (in a good way). I would buy this card for someone I cared about. It's sweet and fun :o)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tonya (the Night Writer)
Tonya (the Night Writer)

"I wanna be like Mother Teresa--but hotter", VA



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