Blonde Mushroom

Blonde Mushroom

A Poem by Urosh D. Stojanovic
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About a blonde mushroom, that grows in the wilds...

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Oh little blonde mushroom near the shore,
tell me why wasn't I able to find you before?
Is it the rain or is it the leaves,
I was blinded by the whole nature it seems.

Oh little blonde mushroom if you can hear,
do you know how you make me feel when you're near?
I feel the warmth, I feel the heat,
only you can remind me how happy I can be.

Oh little blonde mushroom on the ground,
would you allow me to take you and show you around?
If only you weren't attached, if only I was free,
there's no place in the world that we couldn't see.

Oh little blonde mushroom what's this you say,
you want me to stay with you until we can see the sun and the morning rain?
There's nothing more I wish, nothing more I need,
but I can't stay with you forever we both know what's real.

Oh little blonde mushroom in the tall grass,
these last moments make me sad and want to gasp.
I'm losing my breath and I feel like shaking,
why is this hard for me to leave you waiting?

Oh little blonde mushroom in the forest,
the sun is going down and I should get going...
I'm happy that I found you, I'm glad that you exist,
so please don't die on me out here, I will be back

I promise you this.

© 2013 Urosh D. Stojanovic


Author's Note

Urosh D. Stojanovic
This is actually my first poem.
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"Oh little blonde mushroom" is probably the cutest and -- I apologize if this was not your intention -- most hilarious phrase I have ever read.

There is a beautiful simplicity in this poem of yours, a feeling of peace with nature, freedom, and, as Leighton said, indeed some passion.

Very-well written, and the end was lovely. Quite romantic actually, if it wasn't a mushroom.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

Yeah, I did intent to be just a little hilarious. Thanks for the review, means a lot to me...



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this is a good it moved well, i cant belive this is your first poem!!! this is very good

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
first second third

7 Years Ago

no problem
I love it! Its adorable, I must say my day to day was felling a bit down but thanks to you and this "Little blonde Mushroom." My day has been fixed! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

Really?! Woah, I am so honored and happy to hear something like this. I'm really glad you like it an.. read more
Oh, I like your style. It probably have some deep meaning, very very good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

Hahah, well thank you. It does have secret meaning... xD
Very interesting.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

I hope you like it... thanks for the review!
"Oh little blonde mushroom" is probably the cutest and -- I apologize if this was not your intention -- most hilarious phrase I have ever read.

There is a beautiful simplicity in this poem of yours, a feeling of peace with nature, freedom, and, as Leighton said, indeed some passion.

Very-well written, and the end was lovely. Quite romantic actually, if it wasn't a mushroom.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

7 Years Ago

Yeah, I did intent to be just a little hilarious. Thanks for the review, means a lot to me...
Great first poem dude! I bet that the mushroom feels the same way and wants to go places with you too. I hope you make more poetry and that you and the mushroom find a way :)

Keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! And yeah, I hope we find the way too.... ^^
This was quiet and whimsical. It had a child-like nature to it (not childish though). This is great for a first poem. Certainly better than my first attempt.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review...
I like your connection with nature, a mushroom. This is so positive, careless, inspiring, and there's a few crumbs of passionate spread on it. I like your choice of words, but i don't like your ending. I think it would be better if you put something else on the last stanza, to make it rhyming. Of course, you don't have to listen to me, it's your choice, but it's good overall anyway. More then amazing for the first time, you're very talented! And for the end.. When i review your story or poem, should i speak on Croatian or Serbian? Those languages are very similar anyway xD.. Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review. Ending? Yeah I know, it's kinda weird and It sounded much bette.. read more
I like the poem a lot. The beauty of nature should be a motivator for us. The photo was amazing. It is good when we are able to see and write about the gifts of nature. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Urosh D. Stojanovic

8 Years Ago

Thank you for being my first reviewer, your feedback is amazing.

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Urosh D. Stojanovic
Urosh D. Stojanovic

Belgrade, Serbia



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Hello fellow writers and readers... My name is Urosh Stojanovic, I live in Serbia and I've just turned 19. This is actually my second time filling out this 'About Me' form, and I can say that much .. more..

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