Caged

Jumping on the floors my soul unattached
Drowning inside the adrenaline thrust of music
Sailing my emotions reaching for the other side
Inside the insanely ecstatic ride of alcohol and drug
Vivid flashes of women dancing permeate into my brain
Cast aside the morality there are no limits or boundaries
Life is too chaotic and I am no more than slave to my needs
Pause and wonder, could I ever break free from my own cage?

Nyi
9.6.2012

Author's Note

This is basically about going to club and losing myself..things are clear I hope

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

Youth needs to not be wasted..It is the time to explore oneself and enjoy the ride..Growing up comes along all too quickly..go dance..Nice expression of youth in this piece

[Distant horizons]

They are very clear and very well expressed. Going somewhere that you can lose yourelf, with yourself and release yourself into just being. No worry, no appointments to get to. Surely that is why such places exist in the first place. Beautifully written.

[V.J.C.]

This is a really good poems, that i am sire many can connect with. The message is clear, and i thank you for the read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good questions raised in the poem. To be young and needing purpose. Easy to roam the streets and try to have fun. I like the thoughts and questions raised by the poem. I tell the young people. Enjoy your life. Have fun and be careful. Mistakes are just education to make us wiser. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote