World of Abandon

World of Abandon

A Poem by Gaige

Cold winter hymn singing a grave song

A cadence of remorse in remembering

All of those who lie dead and gone

 

Young lover buried in the spring

A perfect mimic of everything pure

Her innocence fallen in soft locks of blonde

The living whisper her name no more

 

Forgotten in a hundred years of snow

Sorrowful, only soul left to chill

An untended cross, a worn stone

Of this beautiful girl's face no one knows

 

Fallen angel left to such a cruel fate

Noose of hope and featherless wings

In eternity alone this pretty girl lays

God has truly left this place

 

© 2011 Gaige


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I love the chilling & intensity of your writing!! It's so beautiful and descriptive, fantastic. Every stanza has it's own feel to it, but they all relate to eachother, really, really, really, excellent poem. I really enjoyed this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very good, and I rarely read poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely poem, deep meaning, awesome words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a pretty poem!!!:') this was great and so beautiful poem and more i love this poem !!! ??? puzzled and some of the reviews and pleading for people to not cause drama again in wc !! jeez!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is really deep, good job =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shizz dude. very very good man i love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Gaige
Gaige

Folsom, CA



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