Seasons

Would you touch my soul beautiful creature?

Be bound in the string my heart's words weave

My tragedy in finding you wounded

I will bind the imperfection that I see

Healing you with earthen hands my creed

Adorned in the crest of a thorn-less rose

My innocence wanes to remind me you are gone

Remember me for the intentions that I am

Surround and consume my fragile wind

Days grow long under foreboding sun

Warmth fails me as I am left absent of embrace

Towards the moon I solemnly pray

For beauty, so desperate, to find me again

So my clear skies are once again filled with rain

On the frozen path of my icy keeper

So lorn and wary of purest desire

How I wish to forever love her

To be ever burned in her scarlet fire

Reviews

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Sooo beautiful!!! Very creative! Loved this poem :) Keep up the good work :D

[Terrance Brown]

This poem is really beautifully written. Your language, and the way it is assembled, is really moving and ascetically sumptuous. I love the lines; 'For beauty, so desperate, to find me again So my clear skies are once again filled with rain.' How wonderfully unconventional.

[Aleyah]

You're an amazing poet. Honestly, every time I read something of yours, I am instantly drawn in and can't stop reading until the poem is finished. The way you tell the story, the way you use incredibly awesome and original imagery each time is wowingg. Anyway, awesome job!!

[Pradnya]

wow!! its just so amazing ,especailly the usage of words

[Lively]

Lovey, heart touching. Every sentence has a deep meaning. Love this line
Be bound in the string my heart's words weave

[misha]

This is a beautiful poem.

[Omegax45]

*hands clapping*

[Sakib]

Pleasant read. Really nice!!!

[brenda]

sweet and beautiful !! great poem !:)

Absolutely gorgeous.