Slight

Memories and stories left to fade

Once more into the breach

For the young of heart do reach

As come to us an end to days
Lovelorn hearts like whispered words

Lying now in hallowed ruins

Hearts in mend of a westward god

Searching, seeking for the buried man's praise

Won't you come and save me

From a world trapped in tears

Rivers of a a salty, bleeding creed

For Jesus Christ I do weep

Free me from the prison of sight

Perdition caught in eyes sewn shut

In remorse I dare believe

Reviews

[Aleyah]

I love your ability to blow me away within a few lines of poetry...you probably blow anyone away! The last two lines are my favorite; one, awesome vocab, two; they're just bloody brilliant. This makes me feel so morose & empty...but the beautiful crafting of this makes up for it. You're honestly a really, really, really, really great writer. No doubts there. Fantastic (: