Head In Clouds

Head In Clouds

A Poem by Mitji
"

Don't tell me you've never wished you could fly!

"

I look to the sky

and wish, wish with all my heart I could fly

My head up  in every cloud

With the silence of the air ringing loud


I laugh as the wind blows by my face

As I zoom to outerspace

Wishing I never had to come down

To the place I hate so much, the ground


I want to live in the sky

My home made way up high

See the ballons float past my head

Blue, Orange, and Red


See the sky in every mood

What a beautiful life I conclude

Just to stay up here forever

Never having to touch the ground whatsoever


I wish I could fly

So high in the sky

 

© 2009 Mitji


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Beautiful, just beautiful. I loved every bit of it ;) A couple typos... but who cares? That's not what writing's about!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, light piece with beautiful similes and imagery. I really love it, gave me a sense of flight and freedom. :) Thanks so much for the read request! -C. C. Burl.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminded me of the song, " I believe I can fly!"
Lovely...Brought back my childhood dreams.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've always wanted to fly too. I had a dream once that I could. I was at Walmart and all these people were asking me if I needed a ride home like Vivian and Horatio (lol) and I was like no. And then I flew home. I did want to be Peter Pan.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mitji
Mitji

New Gloucester, ME



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I love to read and write, and i love music! I love to read, in fact I am addicted to it, my mother has gotten mad at me saying i read too much. I wish I lived in Australia. I want to be a journalist, .. more..

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