lazy bones

lazy bones

A Poem by odhiambo

Lazy bones-blues

 

I was still street,

Dusty feet,

Lean dreams

I could only think these streets,

And how I could escape them.

 

© 2009 odhiambo


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BRILLIANT, BRIEF, HOPEFUL & STREETWISE
LAZY BONE-BLUES COULD BE A SLAMDUNK
AT A SLAM POETRY FEST W/ANOTHER VERSE OR TWO
BUT ONE AGAIN, I REALLY DO LIKE IT'S BREVITY ...
LEELEE
Thanks for joining GBU GROUP


Posted 10 Years Ago


yeah we all love to slack, but then it's so difficult to get up and do something...nice poem, short, sweet and simple

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 29, 2009

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