leaving

leaving

A Poem by odhiambo
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when love is out

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I aint a fool, im just exhausted

You no longer have any hold on me so don’t even fool yourself

We can still share the bed though,

Coz there aint nowhere for me to go yet

But oh yea im looking

 

You are right, im icy lately,

But we both know who brought the snow home

There is no way im staying, it’s out of my hands

And my heart is locked

 

No more tears to shed, so if you see me lost in thoughts,

Im just figuring out how to get out of this hell

I no longer need you

 

I aint a fool, im just exhausted

 

© 2009 odhiambo


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that one hit me hard, the exhaustion reference, perfect to the situation, horrid coupling those words but beautiful in beat and meaning, pulled me away, exhaustion, this one's gonna linger in my head for a while. brilliant piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A outstanding poem and statement. I could feel the emotion and desire to escape.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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