Hugging Home

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Upon a ship left
black sail high
burns the time
that's left behind
these the leaves
to infinite days
roll now comforted
in brand new ways
what's new is old
like coming home
where rest is like
living, infinite
and giving, held
in cradle, once again
borne to tomorrow
now energy kin
loved upon a mile
kissed within a see
traveler upon
perfectness
infinite free

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this write a lot and the pics you chose with it. Perfection at its best.
My favorite lines speak volumes:
" coming home
where rest is like
living, infinite
and giving, held
in cradle, once again
borne to tomorrow "
Thank you for sharing your wisdom...:)

[Souladareatease]

Hey I just saw You across the street...You following me?
:) thank You much Sami for Your kind words!!! (it's a pic of the fates:) I so love paintings upon Mythologies and such...

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I told you I'll see you shortly...Lol
I love them too. Plus it adds an artistic flare to poetry...:)

[Souladareatease]

indeed...indeed:) painting and painting it is... the arts all walk hand in hand!!!

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[The dark story]

i was drawn towards like a bee to the sublime flower when i just read the title...i liked how you have elegantly portrayed a home sweet home...pretty nice!!

[Souladareatease]

secrets i care not keeping for an open book in life i am...this was a write for the passing of a loved one...Thank You for Your read...this was what the sentiment was meant to be...GREATLY appreciated Atiba!!!

[The dark story]

Oh…I got it now…but I think its good to be like an open book sometimes.and don't mention that…everyone loves reading nice works!!