Useless Loving Blood

Useless Loving Blood

A Chapter by Smile It's Megan♥

Behind her tilted head

Brushing his fingers

Along her neck.

A neck of perfection,

Shivering from fear.

He teased her.

With gentle fingers,

Brushing....

Brushing....

A simple slash,

Blood dripped down,

Her tension eased.

Touching the blood,

Bringing toward his lips.

A single taste.

He was off in disgust,

To find satisfaction.

Her body sat alone,

Beginning to drain of blood;

Slowly, Slowly..



© 2010 Smile It's Megan♥


Author's Note

Smile It's Megan♥
Really random. But since when are my poems not random? Review.

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Could be about a murder or (I'm ashamed to say it) vampire and his victim.

Perhaps you wrote the poem randomly, but the contents of the poem aren't necessarily random.

I like the beginning, and how you trailed off at the end.

Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, i really didn't see that coming, i like this poem a lot :]]

-Faith♥

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this. Really well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Awww, poor girl probably he didn't want her -shrugs- I like it was like I was watching in the shadows -sneaks around walls- You can't see me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That is cruel. Not even wanted for food. Bummer. Well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


it reminds me of a story my mom read me when i was a lil gurl....anyways i like it

Posted 11 Years Ago



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