nothing beats

nothing beats

A Poem by iron_rose
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another cheesy one! if you like cheesy poems, this could be for you. if you don't don't sorry, you might not make it through the 3rd stanza...lol

"
all my life i was dreaming
nothing much i could do
never thought that one day
you would actually come true

if i had one more favor
one more wish that i could make
i would ask God to let me spend with you
all the rest of my days

counting day after day
watching tears running dry
holding hands, chasing dreams
together touching skies

every day that i wake beside you
i thank that God i'm alive
but if this life's not long enough
i will have to live twice

how ever dark the night may be
my love will always light your dawn
my love will be your music
when all of the music's gone

and i come and i go
i rise and i fall
i keep falling in love with you

all this world i could keep
but still nothing beats
falling in love with you

all my life i was dreaming

© 2011 iron_rose


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iron_rose
pls be kind...XD

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I really love this!
I don't often go for cheesy things, but, there you go. Lol.
Great poem. :)
Cheers and have a good day.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I'm speechless! This was such a great poem! With very amazing imagery! I even read this to my friend and she loved it too! You my friend are an amazing writer! :) I love this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 3, 2011
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iron_rose

Cebu, Philippines



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