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A Poem by oliviafav
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I wrote this about my parents divorce and how they would always put me in the middle, but I cant decide on a title

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Torn between two 
Stuck in the middle
But no where to go
when things get to brittle
Broken and sad 
Shed stitch herself up
Just like someone would if they got cut
She runs away in the books that she reads
She lives thousands of lives that no one can see 
She dreams of far away places
Where no one sheds a tear 
Because in her dreams
 there would be no fear
No fear of  love or hate
No fear of being judged 
No fear of falling down 
And no fear of getting up
She was torn between two 
and stuck in the middle 
But found somewhere to go 
When things got to brittle.

© 2013 oliviafav


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TLK
I have read this a few times in order to try and recommend a title for you.

As a personal experience, it strikes me very hard. For example, your repetition of the first lines at the end brings new impact to them.

I am wondering if you can see a single image which sums up this poem. Is it about dreaming of the impossible, perhaps? Maybe there is a clinging on to of childhood innocence. That might help you think of a title.


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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oliviafav

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your suggestions I actually never realized that the poem is about childhood innocence .. read more



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TLK
I have read this a few times in order to try and recommend a title for you.

As a personal experience, it strikes me very hard. For example, your repetition of the first lines at the end brings new impact to them.

I am wondering if you can see a single image which sums up this poem. Is it about dreaming of the impossible, perhaps? Maybe there is a clinging on to of childhood innocence. That might help you think of a title.


Welcome to the 'site.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oliviafav

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your suggestions I actually never realized that the poem is about childhood innocence .. read more

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Added on April 29, 2013
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