A Chapter by The Fallen

There is a place.

Where time stands still

Life exists.

But nothing is normal.

Yet, when is anything normal?

Nothing makes sense

Until you experience the world yourself.

A world where you fight, for your life.

Fight to remain free

Witnessing your friends and family die..

Being Immortal has it's down falls.

But being young

and Beautiful

Can be a wonderful thing

That is if you are willing to give up

The life you now possess

If offered the choice

To become Immortal

To live forever

would you?

This offer comes once in a life time

That is, only if you are found

As the ones they call


© 2013 The Fallen

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Ohh yes, it has begun, nice start. I am gonna read this book now.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Oh, sounds so cool... Very mysterious what it takes to be different and to be immortal!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I LOVE this so much, this is very imaginitive and very creative in many ways. This is briliant, great choice of words. You have a briliant mind, this is very well writen. Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Nice intro, you seem to have a talent for pulling your readers into your story...judging by this one. I'm definitely adding this book to my library. I like the question you pose in this poem (and the fact that your prologue is a poem...I like doing that, too).


Also: Love your profile picture. Miku! :3

Posted 11 Years Ago

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Haha thank you :3
Writer #00

11 Years Ago

You are
This was a really cool, original take on a prologue. Almost sounds as if it would be the narration over the trailer for a movie :D But I like it, the tone is edgy and really brings the reader in. Makes me wonder if this is the voice of our main character...

Posted 11 Years Ago

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks! And possibly, but we shall never know :3

Posted 11 Years Ago

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks. The first chapter will be up tonight I hope
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

YAYZ!!! :D
Love it!!!! Can't wait! XD

Posted 11 Years Ago

The Fallen

11 Years Ago

:3 Thanks! I am still working on chapter one...I need it perfected...

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