Redemption.....

Redemption can you

atone for major live changing mistakes?

Can you be delivered, let alone be

rescued from such repulsive things?

To be honest.

 I can not say or even Judge?

Who am I to say or shout out No!

I have no right!

As only the person you did wrong too,

and you also.  Alone between you both.

Can only answer that

question. Out loud to my guess.

I am not sure!

At end of the day. These are only my thoughts

and my own personal ramblings. Yet once more

out loud for all the see and read!

Reviews

[Just Kim]

very intriguing write, enjoyed this

[KeeD]

It's a privilege to be one of the first to review a new piece put out by the sites top writer this week.

To observe through the looking glass and see the world turn a hue of pathos is a defeated task but one we must often put the armour on and walk onward to battle with. What does it mean to be redeemed? I often question myself, will I be fulfilled with the answer? Your poem peeks my suspicion that maybe it is wise to search for answers but it also gives comfort to my secluded emotions that sometimes answers and truths aren't worth waiting for. Sorry I rambled as well and that in my book is a good thing because your poem made me think and get lost in thought and that just tells me it's an intelligent philosophical write. Great job Dee, I'm happy to say I'm a fan of your work.

[Pete]

good for thought. i like the deep, honest introspection. very relatable ... :)

"The problem of restoring to the world original and eternal beauty is solved by redemption of the soul." - Emerson

[Onlyme]

Thanks Pete, was not sure how this one would go down. After I posted it. But thought to myself. Oh pooh. I am leaving it up!

[Pete]

you're welcome. some of my most liked writes are those i thought were rubbish when i penned them. we just never know now do we? ... :)