Stressed to Fcuk & Needing A Laugh

Stressed to Fcuk & Needing A Laugh

A Poem by Dawn

I'm as crazy as a coot
nut as a fruitcake
And stressed to fcuk as well
I am sorry
If I had offended anyone
with any of my poems.
Just needing to vent
a bit of release
As my crazy poems are a bit of fun
to entertain me and make me
laugh out loud
As really I'm soft as margarine
or butter
Preferring on  your taste of course
That's if you like either or none.
Sometimes a good laugh can
brighten up your dreaded filled day
and makes your woes just drift away
even just for short time

© 2018 Dawn


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One thing I've learned by being here and writing is that you should never apologize for what you write in your poems/prose. True, there'll be people who'll judge and assess you as a person based on what you write rather than assessing you as a writer but I think that kinda attitude doesn't last long. As long as what you write holds true to you and you write what you feel (at that moment) that's okay. A good laugh is certainly better in stressful times. Peace to you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

3 Years Ago

I agree with you on that, as so true people judge each other over every single thing in life and tha.. read more



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You never offended with any of your poems..In fact , you know this is one place where you can just forget all your worries and get relaxed..And actually you try to do the same thing with your poems...Well , a laugh is always good at stressed times...because laughter is the best medicine..Here are people who will judge you with what you write but never mind...You are here for yourself not for anyone else...
Keep on writing dear...

Posted 3 Years Ago


well when you can laugh at your self that is freedom of sorts i guess

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like this a lot
you never offended me with the poem about trump i was just sad i suppose that hate even written humerously can breed contempt and hate in others.sorry if i offended you, really sorry xx

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

3 Years Ago

No problem Julie :)
Couldn't agree more!
Life can be both an uphill climb or a downward slope, we just have to learn to cop with either
Thanks Dee!
I am off to catch a good laugh

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

3 Years Ago

Oh god, yes the slid of life up or down or in between both.
Nankya Yudaya

3 Years Ago

True account
One thing I've learned by being here and writing is that you should never apologize for what you write in your poems/prose. True, there'll be people who'll judge and assess you as a person based on what you write rather than assessing you as a writer but I think that kinda attitude doesn't last long. As long as what you write holds true to you and you write what you feel (at that moment) that's okay. A good laugh is certainly better in stressful times. Peace to you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

3 Years Ago

I agree with you on that, as so true people judge each other over every single thing in life and tha.. read more
I like the Fcuk it somehow takes the harshness out and since that is kind of your intention, might I recommend the switch to Fcuk in your first stanza?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

3 Years Ago

Agree and done.

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Added on July 13, 2018
Last Updated on July 13, 2018
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Dawn

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