Tropical Island In The Sun...

Tropical Island In The Sun...

A Poem by Onlyme

Tropical Island
in the sun
white and golden
sandy beaches
palm trees
with coconuts
holidaymakers
drinking and having fun
deckchairs
loungers
tropical bars
close at hand

sea lions, dolphins
white tip reef shark
monarch butterflies
to name a few

cool breeze
on my kin
brown tan
swimsuit
flip-flops
and skaftan
sunglass
and sunhat on
already to
explore
this
adventure
holiday
in the sun.

Jet ski

paddle dipping
in sky blue waters
from paradise

swimming in
gods heaven on earth
before I die.

Go out on a boat
with
glass bottom
base and
see the
tropical fish
and
sharks
and coral below.





© 2018 Onlyme


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Stunning - I was last in Mauritius when I was about 10 years old on glass bottom boat- the beauty of the deep sea- love to be in a hammock in the ocean-...nothing better- wonderful thoughts and pictures painted here- 🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it Rose, Thank you for your lovely thoughts.
I need a tropical vacation myself. Maybe a 10 year one. Nice description took the reader to a better place. Thank you Dee for sharing the wonderful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Dee.
"swimming in
gods heaven on earth
before I die.

Go out on a boat"

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Master of descriptions and zooming in at what all entails. You get us to absorb all these wonderful elements and then be in the scene. Marvelous snapshots.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"sunhat on
already to
explore
this
adventure
holiday
in the sun.

Jet ski

paddle dipping
in sky blue waters
from paradise"


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Sami. hugs

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Added on July 29, 2018
Last Updated on July 29, 2018
Tags: tropical island, beach, sun, vacation, holiday. paradise.

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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