fear of fear....

fear of fear....

A Poem by Onlyme

Fearing the unknown
letting it control you

as it manifests itself
more inside your heart
mind and body.

It's ruling you
ever thought
and decision
you make.

Making you more
paralyzed with every
moment.

Even in your dreams
If you get any sleep...

He is showing himself
and casting a dark
shadow over you.

You are living in fear
of fear itself...

© 2018 Onlyme


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That's a very pertinent read. And you are right. Most times, its not fear. Its the fear of fear that burns inside. Good one.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Gaurav, for your thoughts. hugs Dawn.
Dawn - you are very perceptive. If we allow fear to overwhelm us we become
stagnant and are incapable of doing anything.
Thank you for your thoughtful poetry. - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful poem
Making you paralyzed with every moment
Loved this line

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Ranfer, Hugs Dawn.
Fear can make us cannot see the light of hope. I liked the honest and direct words and thoughts. Thank you dawn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Dawn.
So very true my friend. This is a well-written and thought out poem. Insightful and analytical lines. Verses are minimalist but impactful. Fear is a cruel taskmaster and you have made this point excellently Dawn. Brava.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Annette for your wisdom and kindness. hugs Dawn.

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Added on August 29, 2018
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Tags: fear of fear, controling, weakening, paralying, taking over

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A Poem by Onlyme



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