Beautiful Moments In Time...

Beautiful Moments In Time...

A Poem by Dawn

The sweet things in life.
That makes me smile.
Even on a bad day.
An old couple helping each
other in the supermarket.
Seeing such love and concernment
for each other. Shine through.
And a young mother with her children.
And the children are playing with each
other giggling and laughing out loud.
And it's so infectious the laughter. You
just can't help but laugh out loud.
As you wait patiently at a fish and chip shop
for your supper. Along with this
mother and her kids.
These small insignificant moments in life.
Make me smile. But to me, they are not
insignificant at all. But beautiful moments
in time witnessed and shared.

© 2018 Dawn

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What a lovely poem Dawn!
And it's true, it may seem insignificant to others but truly they are pieces of moments that are beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago

That is beautiful, man.
No more to say; nice write,Dawn.
Gives the reader a warm, secure feeling, doesn't it...the reason for poetry is to convey feelings through mental pictures, so...mission accomplished.

Posted 1 Year Ago

So true. Just some little things makes us feel so blissful.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

So glad you do agree Najam. And thank you.
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You are always welcome.

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3 Reviews
Added on October 16, 2018
Last Updated on October 16, 2018
Tags: beautiful, moments, in, time, witnessed. shared.



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