A Perfect Day.

Walking around a Tulip field

pretty colours everywhere.

Bright reds, yellows, pinks and blues.

Looking up towards the midday sun.

No clouds just a clear blue sky above.

Warm on my shoulders and arms.

My face feels flush with the heat too.

I smile to myself.

As a butterfly comes to join me.

A rabbit runs before me. Then hops

skips and jumps away.

I leave the field of tulips.

And come to

the edge of a river.

I sit down with my feet padding in the water.

Feel the sharpness of the coldness of the water.

I look at my feet in the clear liquid of

the stream.

And I hear a bird sing.

I inhale and breath out.

Thinking to myself.

What a Perfect Day...

Reviews

[J. A. Perkins]

What a vivid picture of a sublime moment in time. One of the most helpful quotes I've ever heard that helped me in poetry is Anton Chekhov "Don't tell the moon is shining. Show me the glint of light on broken glass." You've done just that. My hat's off to you.

[Onlyme]

Thank you J.A. that was really kind of you to say. bless you. Dawn.

[Amanda Trerotola]

I felt a sense of peace while reading this. You created such vivid imagery!

[Onlyme]

Aw your truly lovely Amanda, thankyou. Dawn.