A secluded place.

A secluded place.

A Poem by Dawn

 Dream of a life
better than this one.
I hope of not repeat
this same one
when I die.

I have aspirations of peace, harmony
and laughter.
Instead of hurt, pain and upset.

I tried to go with the flow of
everything that is sent my way.
At times it's hard to keep a stiff
up lip and deal with all the strife.

Sometimes you just want to revert
into yourself. Like a turtle closing
himself off to the world. Inside his
own shell.
Marooned inside your own solitude
and onesome.


Away from everything and everyone.
Where you are at peace and calm
with oneself.



© 2019 Dawn


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yes, sometimes this is exactly what we want to do...when i feel like this i just look over at my tank...three box turtles...and yes, they close up within themselves when they are scared or irritated, and i wonder if it helps them...
i like your metaphor here.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jacob for your thoughts. Dawn.



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I believe life is liked the movie where the man learn, how life would be without him.
"Away from everything and everyone.
Where you are at peace and calm
with oneself."
I want to escape daily. But I know what I did. I saved many and I was saved also. I am a old man now and I am thankful. No easy life. Thank you Dawn for sharing your amazing poetry. I believe we learn our wealth when one day, we learn. We did okay.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

exactly Coyote, we learn and gather knowledge all through our existance on earth. And hopefully assi.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

We must dear Dawn.
I once heard someone say that the search of peace is always so much of inside as much as in the outside. And this remarkably depicts it. I love you flow of thoughts

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Hi Abhishek, Thank you for your thoughts. I like your thinking. I do believe that too. Inner and out.. read more
Abhishek Izy

1 Year Ago

You’re welcome Dawn. Pleasure was mine 😊
yes, sometimes this is exactly what we want to do...when i feel like this i just look over at my tank...three box turtles...and yes, they close up within themselves when they are scared or irritated, and i wonder if it helps them...
i like your metaphor here.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jacob for your thoughts. Dawn.
(((HUGS))) Dawn, you are such a warrior and deserve all. Thinking of you both, happiness and sunshine. Thank you my friend for revealing your heart and sharing with us (((MORE HUGS)))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Thanks Richard for being so lovely. hugs Dawn.

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Added on January 23, 2019
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Tags: solitude, peace, quite, harmony, space, secluded, private, oneself

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Dawn
Dawn

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