The Ultimate F**k YOU.

The Ultimate F**k YOU.

A Poem by Onlyme

It is not nice to see someone
being pushed over the edge.

The mental edge.
I am on about.
To see them start to disappear
and to maybe
be gone for good
this time.

Their are sulen, broken and are
a ghost of yesterday.
Crumbled and damaged.
Their skin is gray or ghostly white.
they are erratic, lethargic and paranoid.
Weak, rotting and sores.

They are nothing like they used to be.
Before they pushed themselves beyond
the limits of who they once were.

Our human minds and bodies
can only cope with so much abuse
before it kicks back. And either give
you an almighty jolt into reality or
kills you. And you're gone for good.

The ultimate. F**k You...

© 2019 Onlyme


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there is a point which varies from one individual to every other that beyond which, there can be no additional give.. that point of flexibility when snap occurs... Each person has their own 'critical point' where without some help, support or intervention, they break or bruise... no one person should be responsible for the breaking and or bruising of another... a sad, but necessary post I think Dawn.... N :

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Neville, I agree totally with you everyone has that critical point. Cheers. Dawn.
Neville

5 Years Ago

Pleasure my friend :)



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there is a point which varies from one individual to every other that beyond which, there can be no additional give.. that point of flexibility when snap occurs... Each person has their own 'critical point' where without some help, support or intervention, they break or bruise... no one person should be responsible for the breaking and or bruising of another... a sad, but necessary post I think Dawn.... N :

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Neville, I agree totally with you everyone has that critical point. Cheers. Dawn.
Neville

5 Years Ago

Pleasure my friend :)
Dawn this is heart wrenching! To have suffered so much abuse. Like you I can not stand to see someone being abused, having experienced it myself. He is long gone now, but the memory is just a thought away.

Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hi David, So sorry to hear you can relate as had your own tormentor to when you were younger. Thinki.. read more
Dave

5 Years Ago

Oh Dawn - it's long forgotten except for the lessons I learned from it. I have never, ever hit my c.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I understand Dave, it helped you see what a good decent parent was for your own kids. :)
The Ultimate f**k you, Dawn, do you struggle on, or curl up and die quietly inside, who is the bravest of the two? good poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

i struggle on and do the two finger salute to my own demons of being abused as a kid by my parents, .. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

gram two finger salute your own demons and be happy for you now.
gram linski

5 Years Ago

I shake hands with the m***********s, and buy those fools a drink,
The human body can take a lot of abuse, you see it enough every day.
But like everything else, it has its limit, that includes mental torture along with the drugs.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Cheers Paul.
yes, it is the ultimate...once we abuse the body or mind for so long and so much there is no coming back from it...we become ghosts of yesterday...uneasy ghosts...

j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

So very True Jacob. Just it hurts to sit back and see someone destroy themself. When you see such go.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

i hear ya...have seen enough of these folks in my lifetime...
j.
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

It so sad and cruel when you cant even see your own goodness no more. That to me is heartbreaking.

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Added on March 5, 2019
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Tags: pushing the limits, boundaries, drugs, drink, pills, cocaine, heroin, cystal meth

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