Fiery Friend

Fiery Friend

A Poem by Dawn

I have a fiery friend
who bark is worse than her bite?

She is outspoken, talkative
and far from shy.

But inside she processes
a great big heart.

She would do anything
from anyone.
Kind, considerate and sweet.

But at face value and
first words
you would run a mile.

moral of this truth
is never judge a person
by the cover get to
know them first.

© 2019 Dawn


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I can't count the number of times Ive been wrong about a person. First impressions are not always the best judge of a person . .. we're far deeper than our skin!
T.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Some people are just loud, doesn't mean they're bad people.
Usually, when you get to know them, they're like everyone else.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

2 Years Ago

Exactly Paul. My point precisely. Dawn.
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Rye
This is a very good write, I enjoyed the flow as well

Posted 2 Years Ago


I must admit i do shy away from loud people , I don't like aggression in any form... but good for you taking the time to find the goodness inside her :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

2 Years Ago

Ah good, Glad to know I never upset you Stella, I was worried in-case I had by accident. Stella, I k.. read more
Stella Armour

2 Years Ago

it's all about being grateful for what you have , not grumbling about what you have not...
Dawn

2 Years Ago

I agree wholeheartedly with you on that Stella. 100 percent. Well said.
Dear Dawn, that is often the case. Unfortunately first impressions can count and some aren't prepared to put up with the barking. Pleased you persevered with your friend to find her true self. You went digging and found the bone (lol).

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

2 Years Ago

I think some men wish those days were back again. Like how their mothers looked after them as a chil.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

I'm absolutely sure, some of them would love that :))
Dawn

2 Years Ago

Sometimes I think men try to turn us into their mums. :)

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Added on April 4, 2019
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Dawn
Dawn

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