A Poem by Dawn

Stuck in the doldrums
feel low and moody
numb and tired.

Can't seem to shake
this feeling.

Spirit is suffering
and my soul is weak.

Needing a good
jump start to
getting the spark
alight again within.

To give me meaning
and direction in my life.

© 2019 Dawn

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Wow! Very emotional read here, This is so well written and said. awesome write here.

Posted 2 Days Ago

Oh my Dawn! I wish I could say welcome to the club, but its' not one any of us wishes to be in.
So many are the times I've wandered through the doldrums. I take heart in the phrase "And this too shall end."
Dawn - I hope this phase quickly passes you by and that soon, all will be well.

Please take care - Dave

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Sorry Dawn... rest your heart! When I feel this way I walk meditate and read a lot and recharge my soul remember always that You are the art of your reflection:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

right to the point, everyone is this way once in a while.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago

straight forward plain language everyone can relate to... the blues come out way .. sometimes out of nowhere and for no good reason it seems ;) your poem actually lifts me up because while empathizing with the speaker I could not help but think of the things I do when that happens to me .. and they work :)))))))))))))))) closing is a little deeper than that tho .. meaning in one's life takes some doing to come to grips with ... blessings from the Creator upon you Dawn! ..i pray.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Music or a walk by the sea/park lake/ where you will

Thay usually work for me

Posted 1 Month Ago

It's strange how you can be great one minute, and straight down the next.
Playing your favourite tunes does it for me, or running.
Hope things get better.

Posted 1 Month Ago

It's really a tough situation and condition to come out from. I have one of my close ones also in depression and so I really wish for you to come out from it soon. The poem is really very nice as it shows the true condition and feeling of a person suffering it. But be hopeful , Happy and stay blessed :)

Posted 1 Month Ago

Music always works for me, something bouncy.

Posted 1 Month Ago

Try music-- Mozart works for me-- sheer joy is in so much of his music.

Posted 1 Month Ago

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12 Reviews
Added on May 27, 2019
Last Updated on May 27, 2019
Tags: doldrums, down, low, dejected, sad, depressed.



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thoughts. thoughts.

A Poem by Dawn

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