Perfection of a a Great Day

Perfection of a a Great Day

A Poem by Onlyme

Basking in the glory
of the sunshine
from gods rays above.

Casting down upon us
here on earth.

Feeling those rays of goodness and
pure joy
penetrating your senses and skin.

And lift you beyond euphoria
inside and out.

No matter where you are
in this world.
Or your race or background.

A beautiful day
is filled with sunshine
and  warmth
with a light breeze
can flood your emotions
 and make you feel so god dam good.

No matter what dilemmas your life holds
in general.

A perfect days weather wise
  can turn those
tears into smiles.

And give you a great day ahead.

© 2019 Onlyme


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A beautiful day
is filled with sunshine
and warmth
with a light breeze

LOVE this part, This is written so well. A most enjoyable read and very truthful

Posted 4 Years Ago


it is the same Moon for everyone...it is the same sunshine for everyone...we are all equal and need to appreciate the beauty around us.
I love that this poem brings smiles and some joy in this dark world where most of what we write is full of angst and pain.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dear Dawn, you have been missed. Hope all is good with you. Happy to see you back posting and with such an uplifting write. A little bit of sunshine can make a big difference. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Aw, you are too kind Dawn. All good here and pleased to hear that you are both doing ok :) Good to s.. read more
Onlyme

4 Years Ago

Thanks Chris. was just thinking of this place the other day. And realized been so long no coming. So.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

You are a sweetheart Dawn. Stay around :)

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Added on July 3, 2019
Last Updated on July 3, 2019
Tags: smile, goodness, happiness, joy, euphoria, blessed, warmth, hot, sunshine, Summer

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme