Fucked Up Families In a Fucked Up World.

Fucked Up Families In a Fucked Up World.

A Poem by Dawn

The guy who is the father
of a miniature football team
the children ranging from
1 year to 18 years.

The Women themselves
having children by other men
at that.

Outwith this guy
being a father to two of her kids.

I feel so sorry for the children.
In this situation.

The women are just daft and believe
the men actually love them.

And the guys are simply chancer more so
lothario.

In a fucked-up "family".
With even bigger fucked up
so-called adults
running the course of their young lives.

© 2019 Dawn


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strong language you used, but you hot the nail on the head with this write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your thoughts, what can i say, iam blunt and straight to the point in this one. Dawn.
Unspoken poet

1 Year Ago

will it's a amazing, I can get blunt myself at times.
as you keep with this theme....Children thinking and expecting to be loved...but the opposite happens...and they just become burdens to the parents who simply don't want the responsibility...
yes, "so-called" adults.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Year Ago

Exactly Jacob.

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Added on July 15, 2019
Last Updated on July 15, 2019
Tags: fucked up, families, broken, sad, suffering, lathario, shag, sex

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