Stony Hearts

Stony Hearts

A Poem by Stony

Stony Hearts

It’s been said that men have stony hearts

 

And gravel fills their souls

 

They rip apart a woman’s heart

And feel they have the right

 

 

But I know a man with a marshmallow heart

Sweet and tender is his soul

He holds my heart with hands so warm

And keeps me safe throughout life’s storms

© 2009 Stony


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I paused at the "marshmallow heart" part. I'm not really sure how to take that description, maybe because I've never really thought of describing a man's heart into something that fragile. Nonetheless, this is still a very interesting poem. It's a little short but it's honesty makes it a lot better.

Keep Writing. ^__^

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so lovely...wish it was so much longer. Thank you for sharing.
Babs xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautifully done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow! This was a great poem! Some men are cold hearted, and some are actually really nice and sweet! It was well written and detailed! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's very sweet and pretty, but seems a little unfinished... like maybe it was a first draft. I prefer the rawness of what hasn't been rewritten, but not everyone does.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I almost wish it were longer, perhaps a sonnet. It is lovely as is.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a sweet poem. I like it. I got a little confused though (maybe I'm just overanalyzing)- but it seemed likt there was trying to be a rhyme pattern but it didn't really know what it was... Eh, I'm just in an editing mood. Good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


So sweetly penned and amazing piece. Very romantic.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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