She came

She came

A Poem by .organized.chaos.
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She came surprisingly, opening up all my senses and demanding attention. She came gracefully, placing her head beautifully on my shoulder. She came peacefully, whispering sweet nothings in my ear as I sleep. She came patiently, allowing things to f

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She came surprisingly,
opening up all my senses and demanding attention.
She came gracefully,
placing her head beautifully on my shoulder.
She came peacefully,
whispering sweet nothings in my ear as I sleep.
She came patiently,
allowing things to flow and mold to our own perfection.
She came interestingly,
intertwining her wisdom with my curiosity.
She came openly,
baring her most hidden, darkest places that no man-made device can reveal. She came sensually,
caressing her lips upon my imperfections.
She came hungrily,
devouring me like her last, most delectacle meal.
She came purposefully,
knowing this would be "It".
She came when least expected.
She came on time.

© 2008 .organized.chaos.


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Nice build up of a relationship..Grows with intensity..
Loved it from beginning to end... Great ending... Related to
how things come unexpectedly & on time...Good going!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


i really loved it. thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2008