Beautifully Broken

Beautifully Broken

A Poem by Hannah Erickson
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This is for my mirror...

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Beautifully broken

You cry out in pain

Stop the sound

Glass houses break

 

Double-mirrored

Introspective vision

Mysterious voyeur

Mask with no mercy

 

Invite me in

Brief glimpses tease

I love what I’ve seen-

Every broken piece

 

Philophobic philosopher,

Release your fear.

Find your fire.

It burns within me.

 

© 2009 Hannah Erickson


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That last stanza is fire. I like the whole poem but that last stanza just really sticks out. tyfs

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Hannah Erickson
Hannah Erickson

Oakland, CA



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This is the only place where my writing from high school still exists. A lot of it is embarrassing to adult me, but I'm not going to begrudge teenage me of her thoughts and feelings. I may add som.. more..

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