(((((((((( CRUSH  DEPTH ))))))))))

(((((((((( CRUSH DEPTH ))))))))))

A Poem by R J Askew

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(((((((((( CRUSH  DEPTH ))))))))))

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And when you think swift love's gone deep

Deeper, down, down, dive, down, down, dive

Deeper go, deep go, deeper .. still ..

Into love's oceaniqueness

Compressionisticalities

In water's hush we are conceived

My coeleocanthus dancus

To love in water's crush we live

To fuse in tidal harmonies

In limpet lips in rushing real

Drowns in water's dream conception

Before before .. before water

Flash in primal pageant master's court

To verse a universe from nought

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© 2013 R J Askew


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Being the first piece of yours that I've read, I'm not disappointed, having been primed by your unusual reviews of late. You are definitely writing outside the dots, which I love, but also with a linear message that I can follow (I'm not good at interpreting abstract). You are so imaginative with your delicious made-up words & completely original observations, blending love ideas with ocean imagery. Some of my faves: "oceaniqueness" . . . "limpet lips" . . . great tidal pool of creativity.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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When falling in love one might just as well go into it clear to the depths of the soul. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Being the first piece of yours that I've read, I'm not disappointed, having been primed by your unusual reviews of late. You are definitely writing outside the dots, which I love, but also with a linear message that I can follow (I'm not good at interpreting abstract). You are so imaginative with your delicious made-up words & completely original observations, blending love ideas with ocean imagery. Some of my faves: "oceaniqueness" . . . "limpet lips" . . . great tidal pool of creativity.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The emotion in this one is radiant. I can feel the ocean take me the whole way through to the end, bringing me deeper and deeper. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very intriguing and interesting read,
enjoyed this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A nice word play. I started to feel like I was going deeper and deeper.

Posted 7 Years Ago


An interesting write, with some clever and playful wordplay! Even the title gives a crushing delivery!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Liked it. what a passionate drive to discover..

Posted 7 Years Ago


I've found that my heroes invented and used the obscure. You have just joined them in the way you have used words to provide a music here. I always liked the Coelocanth as a concept as well as a fish.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ever the telling poet, we learn and grow from you words and playfulness of course, fabulous! Well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Ah' the 'Wordsmith' is well & truly resurrected & mightily refreshed it would seem.
Your neologisms, as always are so compelling & otherwise divine. May your pen never
run dry my fine literary friend. All Good Things, N

Posted 7 Years Ago



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