Joy Touching Words

Joy Touching Words

A Poem by R J Askew

The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves
Touching transmissions of musical light
You surge in hot pulses of language divine
To express your soul made meaningful fine
You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys
To soar in the keeps of creation that buoys
You feel in my feeling your music is felt
That talents to you by life have been dealt
Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves

© 2015 R J Askew


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A perfect tribute to a perfect poet.Love the wonderful expressions that enlightened my heart.
Thank you talented poet for the great gift to your readers.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it.

In a playful way you dialog with your muse. Whose own creations inspire.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A poem rich in colorful adjectives, metaphors, and creative thought. A pleasing read for me this Tuesday.

Nicely done, R J.

100/100

Posted 2 Years Ago


What beautiful words. This is a lovely poem, a talented write.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


hi Rj, im quite new just reading some of your work i loved this write, filled with romance a good read,,

Posted 2 Years Ago


Perfectly put, I would say..............................Regards & All Good Things, Neville

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves."

Very Insightful and like Allen Ginsberg said once " Follow your inner moonlight: Don't hide the madness." Felt the intensity of saying words are powerful when spoken with truest passions behind these verses. Continue writing sincerely your friend in writing and life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Exactly what I might feel, go through and aim to when I write, sometimes I feel like I'm gonna burst my soul into words but don't know how... it's like an urgent need, that burning desire, to create something brilliant... something others can feel in their hearts, that what's important, that they can feel it.

Sensitive write, thank You for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is beautiful without being overly sentimental. It just flowed so nicely. Velvet fog...
Just beautiful :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Tina H.W.

3 Years Ago

I meant to say "pleased" flippin' autocorrect... :P
R J Askew

3 Years Ago

Not at all, I am very difficult to plead!
Tina H.W.

3 Years Ago

Haha talented ANd funny..:)

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R J Askew

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