Joy Touching Words

Joy Touching Words

A Poem by R J Askew

The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves
Touching transmissions of musical light
You surge in hot pulses of language divine
To express your soul made meaningful fine
You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys
To soar in the keeps of creation that buoys
You feel in my feeling your music is felt
That talents to you by life have been dealt
Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves

© 2015 R J Askew

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Hi there,
Really enjoyed this poem of yours.
Very interesting use of words…
I was drawn in by your first line.
The tips of your words are tight….I needed to ponder that one sentence before going to the rest to enjoy the smooth ride through your poem
I always love reading poems that make me think and wonder.
Lisa, sunny afternoon in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago

an enjoyable write. thank you for the read.

Posted 3 Years Ago

A perfect tribute to a perfect poet.Love the wonderful expressions that enlightened my heart.
Thank you talented poet for the great gift to your readers.

Posted 4 Years Ago

I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it.

In a playful way you dialog with your muse. Whose own creations inspire.

Posted 5 Years Ago

A poem rich in colorful adjectives, metaphors, and creative thought. A pleasing read for me this Tuesday.

Nicely done, R J.


Posted 5 Years Ago

What beautiful words. This is a lovely poem, a talented write.


Posted 5 Years Ago

hi Rj, im quite new just reading some of your work i loved this write, filled with romance a good read,,

Posted 6 Years Ago

Perfectly put, I would say..............................Regards & All Good Things, Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago

"Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves."

Very Insightful and like Allen Ginsberg said once " Follow your inner moonlight: Don't hide the madness." Felt the intensity of saying words are powerful when spoken with truest passions behind these verses. Continue writing sincerely your friend in writing and life.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Exactly what I might feel, go through and aim to when I write, sometimes I feel like I'm gonna burst my soul into words but don't know how... it's like an urgent need, that burning desire, to create something brilliant... something others can feel in their hearts, that what's important, that they can feel it.

Sensitive write, thank You for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on June 7, 2015
Last Updated on June 8, 2015


R J Askew
R J Askew

United Kingdom

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