Joy Touching Words

The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves

Touching transmissions of musical light

You surge in hot pulses of language divine

To express your soul made meaningful fine

You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys

To soar in the keeps of creation that buoys

You feel in my feeling your music is felt

That talents to you by life have been dealt

Touching creations of gentle insight

The tips of your words make love-versing curves

Reviews

[Tina H.W.]

This is beautiful without being overly sentimental. It just flowed so nicely. Velvet fog...
Just beautiful :)

[R J Askew]

Arf, arf, velvet fog! love it!

[Tina H.W.]

Ha! That was my tiny attempt at great poetry ;)

[R J Askew]

I approve!

[Tina H.W.]

Haha you're easily pleaded ;)

[Tina H.W.]

I meant to say "pleased" flippin' autocorrect... :P

[R J Askew]

Not at all, I am very difficult to plead!

[Tina H.W.]

Haha talented ANd funny..:)

[Harlotte Crow]

This is absolutely beautiful. It is visually and acoustically appealing with mere choice of wording.

The imagery itself is stunning, deliberate and very well placed. Combining music with a human emotion, running it through the imagination and spilling it through the beauty of language is not an easy task yet here it is.

Not a beat should have been missed on the end of the reader.
I love this!

[Leo]

Melodic and has a very nice sophisticated touch..

Very enjoyable!!

[Hebe]

So fragile and artistic.... music to my ears!:)

[Ken Simm.]

It takes art to write about writing and it takes love to write about love. To write about love writing takes real depth of soul.

[Valentine]

Soulful expressions can be made in a multitude of ways, hearing them is fine, but feeling them is much more. Valentine

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Well, look here how creativity shines in the light of such a unique and resounding voice

[barleygirl]

As I noticed from your recent reviews, your point of view is unique & your way of expressing yourself is creative. In this piece, it feels like you're having more fun word-crafting than actually making your point (which is fine, not a criticism, just an observation). I see the traces of someone who enjoys the sounds of words, collected together, as much as the meaning these words impart.

[WordKnurd]

Not only is this acoustically beautiful (it sounds like Poe minus the melodrama) this poem is also image rich and full of clever meaning. My favorite line is "You pour from the deeps your ink well of joys." That line simply made me smile. It is describing the type of person that the world needs more of.
I really admire all of your poetry. If you get the chance, please review some of mine. I trust your judgment!