ORLANDO'S BLOC
A Poem by
R J Askew
It is good to be positive.
Ten thousand writers!
Writing to heal our planet
Power! to! ... the bloc!
© 2008 R J Askew
Featured Review
I love the words, the image that flooded my mind, though it most likely not the idea you intended... writers writing to save the planet.
Coming from a little town supported by logging, I say writers write on... put all your ideas on paper and toss them on the floor, always reaching for more.
Well done and thank you for the smile and laugh.
Excellent!!
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I love the words, the image that flooded my mind, though it most likely not the idea you intended... writers writing to save the planet.
Coming from a little town supported by logging, I say writers write on... put all your ideas on paper and toss them on the floor, always reaching for more.
Well done and thank you for the smile and laugh.
Excellent!!
Posted 15 Years Ago
I love the words, the image that flooded my mind, though it most likely not the idea you intended... writers writing to save the planet.
Coming from a little town supported by logging, I say writers write on... put all your ideas on paper and toss them on the floor, always reaching for more.
Well done and thank you for the smile and laugh.
Excellent!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very nice. I taste Haiku style, am I right? But I like the concept; writing to heal our planet. If only healing this planet were that simple.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very nice. I taste Haiku style, am I right? But I like the concept; writing to heal our planet. If only healing this planet were that simple.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very nice poem
Sometimes words to heal themselves?
All in this as one
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very nice poem
Sometimes words to heal themselves?
All in this as one
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
its also good to name stuff after yourself;) Its the circle of life!!!!... Im thrusting simba in the air, can you see it?
Posted 16 Years Ago
its also good to name stuff after yourself;) Its the circle of life!!!!... Im thrusting simba in the air, can you see it?
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
nope, I am writing myself into godhood...or a mental institution. Either way, I hope we get annihalated by a race of perfect machines.
This "poem" has flair, it is sort of good. I suppose.
Posted 16 Years Ago
nope, I am writing myself into godhood...or a mental institution. Either way, I hope we get annihalated by a race of perfect machines.
This "poem" has flair, it is sort of good. I suppose.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Thank you for your words - makes me feel like writing!
Light,
Siddartha
Posted 16 Years Ago
Thank you for your words - makes me feel like writing!
Light,
Siddartha
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Your work always manages to make me smile. Cute. Very cute. And good but what's the point of saying that? I'm sure you already know.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Your work always manages to make me smile. Cute. Very cute. And good but what's the point of saying that? I'm sure you already know.
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Yes sir. haiku is actually incredibly hard for me...verbose thing that I am....But you have penned a mantra.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Yes sir. haiku is actually incredibly hard for me...verbose thing that I am....But you have penned a mantra.
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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