WRONG WAY FOUND

WRONG WAY FOUND

A Poem by R J Askew
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Dark breath...

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sthguoht kradeb gnihctaW

seramthgin ruoy woleB

uoy erofeb gnitiaW

suoicsnoc ruoy dniheB

sthguoht xiwteb gniklaW

 

 

MEOP TSOHG

GHOST POEM

 

 

Walking betwix thoughts

Behind your conscious

Waiting before you

Below your nightmares

Watching bedark thoughts

 

 

© 2008 R J Askew


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ha ha - neat - audience participation on another level m8
I'm here with a mirror... but now I'm thinking `well if I print it out... and hold it to the light...
ha ha, neat - a triumph of graphics? - it would be great if the keyboard allowed the possibility of a mirror image
how could I think it would work - demon writer you! ha ha...
It's `good` that the graphic element of the piece overshadows the message I feel... hmm

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Oh...this is so clever! Original, dark and very clever! I was reading the first part thinking "is this a foreign language?" and then the words cleared... I love this.
Every one of your poems I've read, I imagine you in a corner somewhere; watching...
Deliciously dark :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I like it. Sort of confused at first. I think I'm still confused. Never mind it didn't make me think of ghosts. But something better so thank you for that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool! Oh so very sorry, Orlando, I havent been on lately... Grr working around like crazy!!
In love with your masterpieces!!! My Poem Hero!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really cool. you never stop!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh that is VERY cool. I am left handed so reading backwards is actually one of those things I am able to do. Of course - I cant drive a standard transmission because the right side of my body is non compliant. But I liked this. Maybe I should try something backwards. Maybe it would add some 'umpfh' to my oatmeal endeavors.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh that is VERY cool. I am left handed so reading backwards is actually one of those things I am able to do. Of course - I cant drive a standard transmission because the right side of my body is non compliant. But I liked this. Maybe I should try something backwards. Maybe it would add some 'umpfh' to my oatmeal endeavors.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You always twist the words so delightfully. Always throwing us off the mark. Every word every thought is always brand new from your pen. Cheers.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oooo you never cease to amaze me, although this piece just spoiled a project for me - Ha Ha
Hey you know what they say great minds think alike, but then again fools never differ :)

Ok back to the poem, I personally thought this was brilliantly eerie in its own special way, something completely different from you, I am not sure if I ever read something like this from you, which just once again shows your strength as a writer.

Great piece my friend, I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Clever !!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this...too bad you cant do real mirror writing on the comp, my life would be so much easier!! Aside from that as a poem its actually quite sinister and haunting, not just in what it says but how its read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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