LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

A Poem by R J Askew
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The Clash took their title from the BBC's wartime broadcasts to occupied Europe ... the pic, which I took just before going in for a drink wiv me mates, is of one of my fave London pubs ... cheers!

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Your eyes
your Eyesssss
I HOTLY request
To be in your eyes
To be, to be, to be in your eyes
Swish, swish
Swirl, swish
In the swim, in the swim of this shimfinsome fish
My soul request is that you read hear

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© 2011 R J Askew


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Such eyes that you refer to is obviously aware of what you are, minus the present facade that you put on, on account of earthly reality. One wonders if this could be done a little better, with an account of that which is real, that would lend itself to a practice of institutionalization and where everyone would agree that its what they wanted. Thereafter, if the scientist apply to study its bio-phy-chem qualities, you would know the contribution you made. A promising write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


aah well, another twisted one...the title is London Calling and the matter is in one word"delicious"..h aha :D ...the link doesn't open here in my office...so I really couldn't get what you wanted so hotly to be in the eyes of the reader ...swimming ,swishing...so to get the gist have to look further and that is possible from my home...so the review is half done (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Superb writing! This gives a reader much to visualized upon! Great imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


For some reason this reminds of me swedish eyes!

Posted 12 Years Ago


OOHHH THAT WAS FUNKY! IT'S A SONG! LOVE IT.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"shimfinsome fish" Woohoo! I'm going to spend the next three hours trying to get my tongue around that one. :) Damn, that's hard.
I love this. It's great. :) Totally confusing, naturally, but I like that about a poem. It can be interpretted any which way you like.
Fantastic. :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


Eyessssssssssssssss

*raises eyebrow* Good job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hissssssssssss!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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