LONDON CALLING
A Book by
R J Askew
the only real thing is this is the weird little word 'shimfinsome' I will use that again sometime in a decent job. Lemme know what you think it might mean!
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© 2011 R J Askew
Author's Note
Your eyes
your Eyesssss
I HOTLY request
To be in your eyes
To be, to be, to be in your eyes
Swish, swish
Swirl, swish
In the swim, in the swim of this SHIMFINSOME fish
My soul request is that you read hear >>>>> rjaskew.com <<<<<
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Short and sweet, but to the point. I really like it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Short and to the point. Nicely done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Short and to the point. Nicely done.
Extraordinary and very imaginative writing. Your skill and talent shine in this piece.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Extraordinary and very imaginative writing. Your skill and talent shine in this piece.
an awesome website my friend :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
an awesome website my friend :)
This is a very interesting poetic ramble, through thoughts, we all interprete differently. I enjoyed this fully!
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a very interesting poetic ramble, through thoughts, we all interprete differently. I enjoyed this fully!
I love your word "shimfinsome" a good word!
I am glad to see you here :)
I looked . love the photos and yes Louise is a beauty.
I plan to go back later ...
Have a good weekend!
Chloe
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love your word "shimfinsome" a good word!
I am glad to see you here :)
I looked . love the photos and yes Louise is a beauty.
I plan to go back later ...
Have a good weekend!
Chloe
The famed words of repition and power, linger in your piece, well done, good read.
Posted 12 Years Ago
The famed words of repition and power, linger in your piece, well done, good read.
Hello Ron, I visited your website, beautiful house fassades... first, congrat on your book :) It sounds interesting, and you used also some poetry :)
this poem? a great way to say you want her attention! sweet like always. Best wishes, lara
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hello Ron, I visited your website, beautiful house fassades... first, congrat on your book :) It sounds interesting, and you used also some poetry :)
this poem? a great way to say you want her attention! sweet like always. Best wishes, lara
Oh everything looks to be in new color when painted by loves brush
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oh everything looks to be in new color when painted by loves brush
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