A Little Piece of Advice

A Little Piece of Advice

A Poem by Sincerely Yours

For the things that are shattered will most certainly become you

The very things that you so desperately wish to say goodbye to

As long as you are holding on to the world and all its misery

To the world, you are just a speck, a nothing in history

 

So shine brightly, little ember.

Be someone to remember

The world is so full of opportunity

They need to hear

What they cannot bear

Without such ambiguity

 

 

If nothing else

Take away

A little piece

Of my advice today

© 2013 Sincerely Yours


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As long as you are holding on to the world and all its misery
To the world, you are just a speck, a nothing in history ...

I adore these beautiful lines. What all I do find in this piece's a real creation of the world ... your artistry which's well expressed via words. Lovely advice.



Posted 7 Years Ago


I've absolutely never met anyone who was a nothing in the view of history, but the poetry was pleasant. Not your best.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I left writers cafe for a while and here i am coming again to check your writing, still good still alive :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sincerely Yours

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words :)
I take your wonderful little advice.
I agree with you," To the world, you are just a speck, a nothing in history"



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a beautiful and inspiring poem. Well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I have been writing since I was about age eight. I began with nursery rhymes and short stories. I even won a writing contest when I was in third grade out of all young writers my age in the state of M.. more..

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