Thoughts of Waiting

Thoughts of Waiting

A Story by Tinabells

*****


Have you ever thought that you have been waiting for a long time?



Waiting to be catered in restaurants

Waiting for your turn in amusement parks

Waiting for your food

Waiting for calls

Waiting for someone


If you could add the time you spent in waiting

it could be the time for something else

Something more important


But why do we keep waiting?

Why do we keep sacrificing every second?

What are the benefits of waiting?


Maybe, some of us already know the answer

We just don't want to admit it

Because you can't do anything but wait

© 2019 Tinabells


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The pessimist says we're waiting to die.
The optimist says we're waiting to live.
I'm waiting for that tight wad to get a round in.
Also waiting for that nice girl to dump that guy and run away with me.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your visit and review here.
I am not a great waiter. I don't have patience. You are right Tinabells. Many people are waiting and they forget what they wanted. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review :) glad that you like it
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Tinabells.
I love this, This is amazing. I can feel the emotions through out

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you kimmie :) I miss reading you entry
I love this, especially the catering food remark, that's the time when I really hate waiting. This is really good, well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you allie :) I always appreciate your review
thoughts spilled to page

rather refreshing


I think you're clever at experimental style

the poem raises a relevant point as well


-L.S

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tinabells

4 Years Ago

Thank you luke for your review.

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