Wild Youth

*****

Holding your head up to the sky

Looking at the stars with a cry

Thinking of a goodbye

As your tears start to drip-dry

What exactly do you want?

You want to scream

You want to dream

But your mind can't go daunt.

Stop this fake scheme

Have a self-redeem

Leave all your strife

Lead a peaceful life

Reviews

[m3lody mae]

This is so well said, and written nicely done

[Tinabells]

Thank you Melody :)

[Fairy Khan]

It is very important for all of us to clear our heads of any bad experience, memories or people, and live peacefully and happily.
Good one, Tina.

[Tinabells]

Thank you Ms. Fairy :)

[Trouble]

I have to disagree with Luke on this one--sorry. I don't think it's cute, more... peaceful and... hmm, what's that word? Lovely. It's lovely.

[Tinabells]

good thing I read it up to last... Thanks Allie :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a little rhyme laden for my particular taste...but as LitStar said...a cute write which would be appealing to many...I do like the positive theme.
j.

[Tinabells]

Thank you J.

[LitStar]

a transparent write that illuminates a conflicted literary figure


some characters in stories it seems have too many demons

and are simply meant to be bad


cute write



-L.S

[Tinabells]

Thank you Luke :)