Vampire Kisses

Vampires

Vampire kisses

Feeling his hot breath on my neck

My eyes go blurry as he sinks in his teeth

Feeling the blood leave my body

I go pale

He keeps sucking and sucking

I faint

Staring at me impatiently

My vampire

My vampire kiss

Is changing who I am

One step at a time

Can I see myself in a mirror?

Yes...no I can't see myself.

HA, its working.

Forever and all eternity

Finally I am a vampire

From my vampire kisses!

 

Reviews

[Birdman313]

interesting poem don't we all wish we could become a vampire then live forever enjoyed this write

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

good read nice job verry creative..

~SK

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I thought the Vampire had to share his blood with you to transform. I like the feel and movement of this poem. Would be a cool thing. To be young and be able to live forever. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Ah the awesome kiss of the vampire lol
Great work love, I sometimes wonder how that would feel!
The mirror is used well here :)
xx

[clauds294]

This is a great write.

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...that gave me chills. "Feeling the blood leave my body," is well spine chilling. Great write! I like the mirror, too.