Kissing the Sun

Kissing the Sun

A Poem by *Always be Me:)*

Looking into your eyes

Everything just dissapears

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

My soft lips against yours

Nothing is better than feeling that

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

With you I feel complete

Only me and you in the world

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

© 2010 *Always be Me:)*


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Sweet...I really like the thought of kissing the sun. Sizzle.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem! I love the picture it puts in my mind. :)
Wonderful job on this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a soothing poem, love the repition and the visual I get from reading this. Good job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow i like this poem it is very good.. Nice job..

~SK

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was a very beautiful poem, and I enjoyed it much...

"The glow around you is like looking at an Angel
Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun..." :D

Good Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful poem of love. Kind and gentle words allow the reader to feel the thankfulness and joy of true love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how the first two lines of each verse are talking about the same thing, but using different words, and then the ends are the same. Gives it a certain flow.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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*Always be Me:)*
*Always be Me:)*

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Hello, my name is Michaela. I am 28 yrs old and single! I have brown hair and dark greenish blue eyes. I graduated last year....amazing feelings :). I'm 5'3" and I weigh about 140lbs. I love to hang o.. more..

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